Updates, and piling it on

Reading update:

Finished Treasure Island! Yes, it was a shortish novel, but it felt good to finish anything at all in that horrid month of January. How did it compare with the Muppets film version? Plotwise, wildly divergent, as you might imagine (though incredibly, the part where Jim Hawkins sails the ship alone is actually in the book). No Miss Piggy or cannibal tribe on the island, only the half-baked Ben Gunn. More fighting, wounds, and actual death in the book. Interestingly, the Muppets nailed the character of Long John Silver, so much that I kept picturing and hearing Tim Curry as I read. A good adventure, though the end was a little anticlimactic. A writerly note: Stevenson used first-person narration; primarily Jim Hawkins, but switching to Dr. Livesey when he needed to convey action that Jim knew nothing about. Write up the alley of my current WIP.

Books-into-movies update:

We finally finished watching the HBO miniseries John Adams (based on the biography by David McCullough). We had many interruptions between the sixth and seventh parts, including Life, illness, the need to sleep, and a cracked Netflix DVD. But we persevered, and honestly, we could just have skipped the final installment. As my husband put it (before he drifted off), “too much personal drama.” The last part has Adams retired and at home, his children dying or being abandoned by their husbands, etc. Do I want to see, hear, or even imagine a woman suffering a mastectomy without anesthesia? No, thank you. Nor do I want to see old men dying in their beds, eyes staring, while their families weep around them. (Ah, Jefferson! Where are your elegant drawl, your satin waistcoats now?) I might just add here that I once saw a documentary on historic houses (with Bob Vila) that showed Thomas Jefferson’s bedroom, and the bed in which he died; and it looked nothing like the bedroom in the movie. The one saving grace (besides the stirring movie score), is that if you stick it out to the end, you hear an Adams quotation in voice-over: “Now posterity—it will never know how much it cost us to preserve your freedom. I hope that you will make a good use of it. If you do not, I shall repent in heaven that I ever took half the pains to preserve it.” I think that’s pretty good.

Writing update:

I finished interviewing two main characters (six single-spaced pages for the first and maybe three for the second), and am now working on one of the “villains.” What I love about this process is discovering the little details and idiosyncrasies that might never show up in the story, but which make the characters who they are. Once, at a Teen Writers Workshop, one of the kids asked, “How can you say you don’t know everything about your character? Didn’t you make him up?” Yes, and no. It’s a little like getting to know any flesh-and-blood person. There are layers there that need to be explored.

Piling it on:

pileWent to two different libraries yesterday. The top two are books I had requested through interlibrary loan; the rest are books that just caught my attention as I browsed (alone! sans children!) the stacks. Empires of Light, by Jill Jonnes, and Joplin’s Ghost, by Tananarive Due, are linked by a mysterious thread that will be revealed with the next edition of Lit for All. The Patriots is for novel research; the rest are for fun. I know, pretty ambitious for someone who finished reading a whopping one novel in all of January.

Updates

Weather update:

Snow again.

Reading update:

You’d think this kind of weather would give me more time to curl up with a good book, but alas, now that the holidays are over and school is back in session, the whole family is thrown back onto the dizzying wheel of activity. Fortunately, before all this back-to-real-life frenzy began, I did manage to finish reading one book: Philip Reeve’s Here Lies Arthur.

In a previous post, I expressed doubts and dismay after early forays into this book. Let me humbly say here that I stand (mostly) corrected. I have to credit Reeve with truly excellent writing and storytelling skills; notwithstanding the fact that only one of the characters appealed to me much at all (NOT the main character, but the “love interest,” if you will, young Peredur), I had a hard time putting the book down. Partly I wanted to see how Reeve would re-cast the classic Arthurian events, but also I simply wanted to know what happened next.

One of my initial questions was, What is Reeve trying to accomplish by turning the King Arthur story so rudely on its head? One answer I found was that the book is about how legends are made, a story about the power of stories. One little gripe: I did have some believability issues with the transformation of the central character Gwena/Gwen from girl to boy and back again (and back again). But perhaps this is Reeve furthering his metafictional theme: Just as Gwena and Myrddin persuade the people of Britain to believe that Arthur is a great hero, is Reeve winking at the reader as he tries to pull one over on us?

Books-into-movies update:

My husband and I have now watched half of the HBO miniseries John Adams (based on the biography by David McCullough). I offer some halfway-point observations. The film takes a whirlwind ride through the American Revolution and its aftermath, focusing more on personality (how the events impact Adams and his family and vice versa) than on the details of the conflict itself. On the plus side, this results in some fascinating insights into the politics of the Continental Congress instead of the well-trod battleground stuff. On the minus side, I did find it mystifying how eleven years of Revolutionary history passed without the Adams children aging one day. True, one child was added (initially predicted by Abigail’s burgeoning belly, appearing the next moment as a four-year-old boy), but otherwise the children looked exactly the same on the day Abigail learned of Cornwallis’s surrender at Yorktown (1781) as they did the day of the Boston Massacre (1770).

Most humorous portrayal: Benjamin Franklin with his stringy gray hair and his aged French-nobility mistress. Most gratifying portrayal: Thomas Jefferson, with his nonchalant elegance, his soft-spoken and cultured intelligence, his gorgeous clothes (oh! the clothes!). In one favorite scene, he lounges at a desk while Franklin and Adams critique his work on the Declaration of Independence, his facial expression a combination of pain and affected indifference. When Franklin bluntly suggests they should use the word “self-evident” (as in, We hold these truths to be…) instead of Jefferson’s more grandiose phrase, Jefferson lifts his chin and says, “I assure you that I chose every word with care.” Priceless, and something any writer who shares his or her work can identify with. Which leads me to…

Writing update:

I sent the first section of Early First Draft of my current WIP off to my trusted critique buddies yesterday. I think I have a plot. I have 20-odd pages of text. Life is good.

Eighth day of Christmas books

Due to my fascination with American Revolutionary history, my current WIP (though a fantasy) will have plenty of colonial and revolutionary elements. Now that I’ve decided it’s time to include a plot, I’m gearing myself up for some more research-reading.

On my bookshelves already:

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Founding Brothers: The Revolutionary Generation by Joseph J. Ellis (got this for Christmas last year, or the year before)
1776 by David McCullough
John, Paul, George & Ben by Lane Smith (for kids)
The American Revolution: A History by Gordon S. Wood

On my wish/to-be-read list:

Sea Raiders of the American Revolution: The Continental Navy in European Waters by E. Gordon Bowen-Hassell
The American Revolution: A History in Documents by Steven C. Bullock
Through a Howling Wilderness: Benedict Arnold’s March to Quebec, 1775 by Thomas A. Desjardin
A Narrative of a Revolutionary Soldier by Joseph Plumb Martin
A Guide to the Battles of the American Revolution by Theodore P. Savas and J. David Dameron

Other great Revolutionary books I’ve read in the past few years:

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His Excellency, George Washington by Joseph J. Ellis
John Adams by David McCullough (I have the DVDs waiting for me here at home, too)
I Was a Teenager in the American Revolution by Elizabeth Ryan Metz

I’m sure there are more books in all of these categories, but they escape my memory at the moment. (I should really keep a journal of these things.)